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Elizabeth Spann Craig said in August 28th, 2009 at 2:50 am

It’s hard to disagree with Maeve! I’d only add that I do have a manuscript graveyard of projects I realized weren’t up to snuff before I finished them. But I finish anything viable.

Elizabeth
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Shonna said in August 28th, 2009 at 9:30 am

Elizabeth, that brings up a whole other discussion! How do you know when the book is a dud? Or can you find the part where it fails and fix it?

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Elizabeth Spann Craig said in August 28th, 2009 at 4:05 pm

Actually, I wrote a blog post on it a while back (insert plug for me! :) ) Here’s the link: http://mysterywritingismurder.blogspot.com/2009/07/signs-your-project-isn-going-well.html

Basically, these are biggies for me:
* You can’t logically explain what motivates the protagonist’s behavior.
* Along the same lines, your character has completely changed with no reasonable explanation.
* You can’t get into the protagonist’s head. They seem flat. You can’t identify with them at all.
* The plot limps along with no discernable conflict.
* There’s too much conflict and it changes from one thing to another. There’s no primary focus. There’s no theme, just ‘the world vs. John Smith.’
* There’s only external conflict and no internal conflict for the main character.
* The protagonist is unlikeable.
* There’s no readily-identifiable antagonist. There’s just bad stuff that happens.
* Your content is a mess with flashbacks, backstory, telling instead of showing, too many dialogue tags, and point of view issues.
* Your characters aren’t original. They’re more like stock characters (the alcoholic cop, the snooty society lady, the shy librarian).

These can be FIXED….but do we have the time?

Elizabeth
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Stephanie Shackelford said in August 30th, 2009 at 10:00 pm

Good question, Shonna. What would be lost and how would I feel if I didn’t finish X? I have to admit my first, knee-jerk reaction was insightful. I thought it would be guilt and disappointment, but my first thought regarding my fiction project was, “Relief!” while my first thought regarding one of my non-fiction projects was, “What a shame and waste! I can’t not finish it!” I guess I know which project I need to work on now and which one to lay aside. :)

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Shonna said in August 30th, 2009 at 10:22 pm

Elizabeth–Ooo, that’s a really good, concise list. Gotta print that one out. BTW, loved the picture of the plant on your blog; I have several that look just like it, poor things.

Stephanie–interesting insight! Non-fiction it is.

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