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		<title>By: Routines for Writers &#187; Post Topic &#187; What a Feeling!</title>
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		<dc:creator>Routines for Writers &#187; Post Topic &#187; What a Feeling!</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 May 2010 07:03:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] for my writing? I’m up to Lecture #4 on Margie Lawson’s Deep EDITS lecture pack. Again and again she blows me away with her teaching. SO glad I set the time aside to work through [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] for my writing? I’m up to Lecture #4 on Margie Lawson’s Deep EDITS lecture pack. Again and again she blows me away with her teaching. SO glad I set the time aside to work through [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Stephanie Shackelford</title>
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		<dc:creator>Stephanie Shackelford</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 19:37:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Margie,  I just want to say thanks for sharing so much with us.  I have a couple of your lecture packets and I&#039;ve taken your Defeating Self-Defeating Behaviors class. You are a treasure trove of encouragement, instruction and inspiration.  Thank you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Margie,  I just want to say thanks for sharing so much with us.  I have a couple of your lecture packets and I&#8217;ve taken your Defeating Self-Defeating Behaviors class. You are a treasure trove of encouragement, instruction and inspiration.  Thank you!</p>
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		<title>By: L Nissen</title>
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		<dc:creator>L Nissen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 22:25:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Margie,

You have inspired my first blog post ever.  I adore your edits system, and saw it make a step change in my writing when I started using it.  Thank you for sharing your system and helping me to see the Power of Pink! (I&#039;m a thinking girl, and the hook of visceral responses was an eye opener for me.)

Thank you again,

Lynn</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Margie,</p>
<p>You have inspired my first blog post ever.  I adore your edits system, and saw it make a step change in my writing when I started using it.  Thank you for sharing your system and helping me to see the Power of Pink! (I&#8217;m a thinking girl, and the hook of visceral responses was an eye opener for me.)</p>
<p>Thank you again,</p>
<p>Lynn</p>
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		<title>By: Shonna Slayton</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shonna Slayton</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 16:36:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Margie! You&#039;ve been such a great guest. Who&#039;d have thought revision and editing could be this much fun? We&#039;ve enjoyed sharing your insight with our readers. We&#039;ll miss you around here, come Feb!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Margie! You&#8217;ve been such a great guest. Who&#8217;d have thought revision and editing could be this much fun? We&#8217;ve enjoyed sharing your insight with our readers. We&#8217;ll miss you around here, come Feb!</p>
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		<title>By: Kitty Bucholtz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kitty Bucholtz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 09:40:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Margie,

You are SUCH a SWEET woman! Thanks so much for your amazing generosity! To all of us!

God bless you lots!!
Love, Kitty   :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Margie,</p>
<p>You are SUCH a SWEET woman! Thanks so much for your amazing generosity! To all of us!</p>
<p>God bless you lots!!<br />
Love, Kitty   <img src='http://www.routinesforwriters.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Margie Lawson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Margie Lawson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 05:00:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>PS from MARGIE --

HMM -- I said FOUR FYI&#039;s in the post above. 

I listed three. Here&#039;s #4.  :-)

4.  I introduce my EDITS System in Empowering Characters&#039; Emotions, which I teach on-line in March. For more information -- click on my SCHEDULE on my web site.

THANK YOU!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>PS from MARGIE &#8211;</p>
<p>HMM &#8212; I said FOUR FYI&#8217;s in the post above. </p>
<p>I listed three. Here&#8217;s #4.  <img src='http://www.routinesforwriters.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>4.  I introduce my EDITS System in Empowering Characters&#8217; Emotions, which I teach on-line in March. For more information &#8212; click on my SCHEDULE on my web site.</p>
<p>THANK YOU!</p>
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		<title>By: Margie Lawson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Margie Lawson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 04:52:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>HELLO AGAIN!

FOUR FYI&#039;s!

1. My NEWSLETTER always includes a Deep Editing Analysis. To read some of my DEA&#039;s, click on Deep Editing Analyses on my web site, www.MargieLawson.com.  You can sign up for my newsletter on the home page of my web site.

2.  Don&#039;t miss my Dare Devil Dachshund Contest!
Check it out on my web site. You may win one hour of my Deep Editng brain.

3.  I host a monthly How-to Author Series on my web site on the last Wednesday of the month. The next one is Wednesday, January 27th. I hope you drop by on Jan. 27th. Post a comment and you could win a Lecture Packet!

THANK YOU AGAIN TO SHONNA, STEPHANIE, AND KITTY from ROUTINES FOR WRITERS.  I appreciate you three!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HELLO AGAIN!</p>
<p>FOUR FYI&#8217;s!</p>
<p>1. My NEWSLETTER always includes a Deep Editing Analysis. To read some of my DEA&#8217;s, click on Deep Editing Analyses on my web site, <a href="http://www.MargieLawson.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.MargieLawson.com</a>.  You can sign up for my newsletter on the home page of my web site.</p>
<p>2.  Don&#8217;t miss my Dare Devil Dachshund Contest!<br />
Check it out on my web site. You may win one hour of my Deep Editng brain.</p>
<p>3.  I host a monthly How-to Author Series on my web site on the last Wednesday of the month. The next one is Wednesday, January 27th. I hope you drop by on Jan. 27th. Post a comment and you could win a Lecture Packet!</p>
<p>THANK YOU AGAIN TO SHONNA, STEPHANIE, AND KITTY from ROUTINES FOR WRITERS.  I appreciate you three!</p>
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		<title>By: Margie Lawson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Margie Lawson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 04:44:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>HELLO!

THE DRAWING: 

When I pulled out a strip of paper, I had two strips of paper hooked together.

GEE -- We&#039;ll have to have two winners!

The TWO WINNERS ARE:  CHASSILY -- AND JOAN SWAN!

Chassily and Joan: Please e-mail me and let me know which of my six Lecture Packets you would like me to send you.  I&#039;ll send the lectures as e-mail attachments.  

I AM HONORED TO BE A GUEST ON THE ROUTINES FOR WRITERS BLOG. I&#039;M SO IMPRESSED WITH SHONNA and STEPHANIE and KITTY.  They have each earned a Lecture Packet too.

S, S, and K -- Please e-mail me with your choice of Lecture Packets too!

YOU CAN ALL READ THE DESCRIPTIONS FOR MY SIX LECTURE PACKETS ON MY WEB SITE:  www.MargieLawson.com

I enjoyed every post to the blog. Thanks so much to all of you for joining me today.  I appreciate you all!

SEE YOU NEXT TUESDAY -- FOR MY LAST GUEST BLOG ON REVISION.  

All smiles.............Margie</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HELLO!</p>
<p>THE DRAWING: </p>
<p>When I pulled out a strip of paper, I had two strips of paper hooked together.</p>
<p>GEE &#8212; We&#8217;ll have to have two winners!</p>
<p>The TWO WINNERS ARE:  CHASSILY &#8212; AND JOAN SWAN!</p>
<p>Chassily and Joan: Please e-mail me and let me know which of my six Lecture Packets you would like me to send you.  I&#8217;ll send the lectures as e-mail attachments.  </p>
<p>I AM HONORED TO BE A GUEST ON THE ROUTINES FOR WRITERS BLOG. I&#8217;M SO IMPRESSED WITH SHONNA and STEPHANIE and KITTY.  They have each earned a Lecture Packet too.</p>
<p>S, S, and K &#8212; Please e-mail me with your choice of Lecture Packets too!</p>
<p>YOU CAN ALL READ THE DESCRIPTIONS FOR MY SIX LECTURE PACKETS ON MY WEB SITE:  <a href="http://www.MargieLawson.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.MargieLawson.com</a></p>
<p>I enjoyed every post to the blog. Thanks so much to all of you for joining me today.  I appreciate you all!</p>
<p>SEE YOU NEXT TUESDAY &#8212; FOR MY LAST GUEST BLOG ON REVISION.  </p>
<p>All smiles&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;.Margie</p>
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		<title>By: Margie Lawson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Margie Lawson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 04:05:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>HELLO TES --

GREAT QUESTION!

I find a higher percentage of GREEN in historicals, fantasy, paranormals - anything other-wordly. GREEN covers setting and character description. When sharing other worlds, writers need to provide more description.

I find more RED PEN in suspense and thrillers that are loaded with action scenes.

The BALANCE of EDITS System colors will vary somewhat due to voice, genre, style, scene. 

Thanks for asking! I hope to see you on-line again!



teshilaire said in January 19th, 2010 at 1:45 pm

Margie,

Do you find that different types of fiction (ie urban fantasy vs contemporary vs historical vs suspense) are weighted more with certain colors than others using your EDITS system? and if so, is this necessary and good? or should all genre’s strive for a particular balance?

Thanks!
Tes</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HELLO TES &#8211;</p>
<p>GREAT QUESTION!</p>
<p>I find a higher percentage of GREEN in historicals, fantasy, paranormals &#8211; anything other-wordly. GREEN covers setting and character description. When sharing other worlds, writers need to provide more description.</p>
<p>I find more RED PEN in suspense and thrillers that are loaded with action scenes.</p>
<p>The BALANCE of EDITS System colors will vary somewhat due to voice, genre, style, scene. </p>
<p>Thanks for asking! I hope to see you on-line again!</p>
<p>teshilaire said in January 19th, 2010 at 1:45 pm</p>
<p>Margie,</p>
<p>Do you find that different types of fiction (ie urban fantasy vs contemporary vs historical vs suspense) are weighted more with certain colors than others using your EDITS system? and if so, is this necessary and good? or should all genre’s strive for a particular balance?</p>
<p>Thanks!<br />
Tes</p>
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		<title>By: Margie Lawson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Margie Lawson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 03:55:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>HELLO WHAT IF GIRL!

Ah - You&#039;re diving into my Deep Editing Lecture Packet. Enjoy!

I&#039;m sitting in front of a roaring fire now. One miniature dachshund on my lap (with my new Acer!) and the other miniature dachshund next to me in the rocking chair. Happy times!

Hope you are having happy times too.  :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HELLO WHAT IF GIRL!</p>
<p>Ah &#8211; You&#8217;re diving into my Deep Editing Lecture Packet. Enjoy!</p>
<p>I&#8217;m sitting in front of a roaring fire now. One miniature dachshund on my lap (with my new Acer!) and the other miniature dachshund next to me in the rocking chair. Happy times!</p>
<p>Hope you are having happy times too.  <img src='http://www.routinesforwriters.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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