I’ve been going round and round the same issues with my WIP for months. My infamous critiquer and I are making progress, but in some ways seem to be going in circles. To be honest, I’d rather be going in a straight line!
A few weeks ago Kitty took a look at my beginning pages and I told her the sticking points I was struggling through. She asked me:
What’s holding you back?
Great question!
One example: my critiquer suggested I raise the age of my character, making my book YA instead of MG. *gulp* I entertained the idea for a few weeks, but after checking out the bookstore, scurried right back to MG.
Then my critiquer brought it up again. I still haven’t convinced her it should be MG.
What is holding me back?
My excuses reasons: I wrote an upper MG book. I like upper MG books. MG is where I see my comp titles. Have you SEEN the YA section? Black covers everywhere! Angst. Dystopia. Death. So not my book.
And yet…last week I was on vacation and visited several bookstores and browsed their YA sections. Not every cover was cold and foreboding. My book could end up on a shelf like that and not get beat up by the books around it. I found some updated fairytale books which are more like what I’m writing. And a new hot book out: The False Prince was shelved in YA, but online, people are calling it MG. Perhaps a book could be both.
So I did it. My character is now older. Strangely enough, her voice is easier to hear. It feels more natural to write her thoughts and emotions without feeling like I’m going overboard on being in her head.
I really hope this change will bring about the other changes that I need to get me out of this editing circle.
How about you? What is holding you back?


